Monday, 2 June 2014

Project 0. Conventional and Unconventional Composition

On page 23 of the course notes students are asked to produce two sets, each of three images. In the first set the composition should strive for balance and harmony, whilst the second set calls for an unusual or unbalanced composition. In the latter set of images, good reasons for using the unconventional compositions should be put forward.
Conventional Images

I normally strive, with mixed success, for balance and harmony in my images. In theory, it should be easy to produce three balanced images. However, for this exercise I tried to produce examples in which two “subjects” were placed on opposite sides of the image in order to balance each other, mirroring the examples that Michael Freeman uses in the course notes (pp19-22).


In the first photograph (above), taken underneath the A10 flyover near Ware in Hertfordshire, I have attempted to balance the pillar on the left, with accompanying graffiti, with the flyover itself, which recedes into the distance on the right. The intention is to draw the viewer’s eyes to the graffiti in the foreground before following the road into the distance. The brightness of the graffiti, coupled with the position of the pillar close to the edge of the frame, at least compensates for the pillar occupying less than half of the frame. The two units, although connected out of the frame, are separated in the photograph by the horizontal canal and the small tree. Unfortunately the weather was overcast and gloomy. I could have cropped in from the left and retained balance in the composition, but that would have meant losing part of one of the graffiti “figures”, which I didn’t want to do.


The second image is a photograph of a loaded barge on the River Thames, with Battersea power station in the background. Although a bridge, several other buildings and the Thames foreshore are also present I believe that the barge and the power station are the key subjects. The power station, although smaller in the frame, balances the barge by being close to the edge of the frame and having its four very distinctive chimneys, which draw the viewer’s eye. In contrast, the “centre of gravity” of the barge is close to the centre of the frame. Both the barge and the curve of the foreshore (with accompanying long, thin pool of water) point towards the power station, providing a connection between the two main subjects. I was unable to fit the far left hand edge of the power station onto the frame because it was blocked by other buildings and I was unable to find a better viewpoint. The image has been cropped in order to remove some foreground and some of the dreary sky.


The third image was a “grab shot”, taken in Covent Garden, London. The lady on the left has taken a photograph of the street performer on the right and both are examining the result (I think I heard him pointing out a few technical problems with the shot….). I have cropped in from the left in order to remove more of the lady’s bright yellow jacket and leave what I believe to be a balanced, “square” image with a diagonal link between the subjects. I wanted to include both their faces: consequently I had to include part of a passer-by and some empty pavement. Whilst the lady occupies more space the street performer, by virtue of his unusual appearance, might be considered to balance her. A third subject, in the form of the pink mobile phone, is worthy of mention. Both people are looking at it, so it forms a link between them. The positioning of the subjects and their lack of eye contact makes this the most “unconventional” of these three conventional images.


Unconventional Composition
The more difficult part of the remit was to produce unconventional images that had been deliberately created for a reason. It was hard to find examples of subjects that could not be photographed in a conventional manner to produce a “better” image.



The “unconventional” element of the first image (above) is the out of focus section of ladder that separates the viewer from the people behind it: why did I have to incorporate it into the picture? Well, at the top of the ladder is another Covent Garden street performer doing a balancing act, much to the amusement of the spectators, many of whom are looking up at him. My aim is that the viewer will realise that the ladder has significance and is connected to the (generally) amused expressions on peoples’ faces. I have also positioned the camera to enclose the faces of two of the closest spectators within the rectangular frame provided by the gap between the two rungs of the ladder.


These fields near Kelshall, close to where I live in Royston, are much loved by landscape photographers who enjoy the subtle undulations of the ground and the patchwork of different colours, particularly when clouds are scudding across the sky on a sunny day and shadows add to the patchwork effect. I regularly visit this area to take photographs and have used some of the resultant images for earlier OCA course work, as well as for the current course.
The unconventional aspect of this image is that I have moved my subjects (a herd of fallow deer and a section of a bush) to the very edge of the frame (top left and bottom right), whilst leaving the vast bulk of the frame as an exercise in form and colour. The idea is both to retain a sort of balance (but in an extreme way) and also to give a sense of scale by incorporating the tiny deer. The absence of any subject would have produced a completely abstract image, with little to interest the viewer. Here, the diagonals produced by the field margins and “tramlines” are enhanced by the diagonal connection between the limited subject matter. I have cropped in slightly from the right and the bottom of the frame to produce this image.


The final photograph, of the Selfridges building in Birmingham, views the building and part of a bridge (that links it to another building) from an unconventional angle. The fact that the wire supporting the bridge is almost vertical in the frame lends an air of authenticity to the view. In fact the wire connects the bridge at an angle and the bridge is horizontal.
The photograph was taken to emphasise the curves of the Selfridges building and its unique design. The viewer’s eye is intended to follow the lines of circles from the left hand edge of the frame to the top right, then down the wire to the bridge and finally to ask either: “why is the bridge not horizontal?” or “what is this object that falls off the bottom of the image”?

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