Thursday, 11 September 2014

Assignment 3: Critical Essay. Tutor Feedback and Final Comments

In the critical essay I commented on the role of the genre of wildlife photography (current, past and possibly future) and attempted to answer the following questions:

  •         What are its values?
  •      What is its current status?
  •          Why is it largely ignored by the photographic art establishment?
  •          In contrast, why is the genre of landscape photography (with which it has much in common) greeted by the photographic art establishment with far greater critical appreciation?
  •          Is it possible to bridge the perceived gap between wildlife photography and photographic art in the future?
  •          What benefits can the traditional “figurative” values of the genre bring?


By the time I had finished the essay I was satisfied that I had at least had a go at answering these questions and had painted an objective (although admittedly broad brush) picture of the genre of wildlife photography and its links with other genres, as well as looking at some possible future directions for the genre.


My tutor was not so happy, feeling in particular that the title of the essay (“Understanding the genre of wildlife photography: what are its values and is it art?”) was too broad (in retrospect I agree with this) and didn’t allow me to get to the heart of the topic. He noted that the document “has a good deal of interest relative to your study area” and that “you have made a good effort in the review and to develop your knowledge and understanding for the major project work”. However, “there is a limited amount of knowledge gained from this research piece in terms of how you can move your own work forward”. In his response he highlighted two areas that might, in their own right, have provided narrower subject areas for an essay. These are highlighted in points 1 and 2 below:

1.       “How does aesthetic appeal grow into pleasurable feeling for a viewer? Why or how can a documentary photograph evoke ethos, empathy or sympathy – considered or emotional reactions?” and:

2.       “What do wildlife artists add to their work that photographers may not understand and/or use?” Comparing and contrasting the work of a number of wildlife artists with known photographers of similar subjects would have allowed me to “categorise the elements involved” (in looking at the artists’ work as art) and perhaps identify a way forward for photographers who also wish their work to be considered as art.

Both areas are, as my tutor pointed out, pertinent and very relevant to my major project work and will be of value to me in plotting a way forward. They could have made good subjects for a separate essay. Nevertheless, the subject matter for the critical review had been agreed with my tutor beforehand and there is no way that I could have incorporated the issues raised by these points (assuming that I had thought of them!) into the planned essay without expanding it well beyond 3000 words.

In the essay I reviewed the work of Daniel Beltrá, a photojournalist who carries out assignment work for Greenpeace, within the context of showing that photojournalism can, in the right hands, amalgamate the genres of wildlife and documentary photography. My tutor commented that “you review his work well” but: “He is a photojournalist. He isn’t a wildlife photographer”. I disagree with this statement. Beltrá is both a photojournalist (by profession) and a wildlife photographer. More importantly, he cares for the environment and publicises the way that we are destroying the environment by the use of abstract, “artistic” images that have great aesthetic appeal and therefore attract a wide audience, publicity and a public reaction that just may bring to the fore environmentalists of the future. These, in turn, might even prevent the loss of all our wildlife. I removed a number of strong and/or controversial statements from the final draft of the essay but left one in. Referring to the (potential) influence of wildlife photographers it reads as follows: “…. and they need to be influential, because the damage we are causing to the environment may ultimately lead to the genre of wildlife photography disappearing altogether, as there will be no wildlife left to photograph”. This statement ties in strongly with the first and last questions posed in my introduction, above. The use of photojournalism to bind wildlife and documentary photography together, the use of the image of oiled pelicans (is this not a wildlife photograph?) and the popularity of images of threatened species (“take a look at this portrait of a tiger in the wild, because you will have to go to a zoo to see them in the future”) point to current and future values for wildlife photography, both “figurative” and “artistic”.

My tutor made the points that I did not provide names when talking about the world of photographic art (this was quite deliberate and also applied to my discussion of the world of the wildlife photographer) and that I provided no statistics in the review (the example he quoted was that when Kodak made film only 5% of the output was provided for the professional market [I’m surprised that the figure wasn’t lower!]). Point taken, but I didn’t feel it was necessary to quote statistics to make my points. Perhaps I was wrong.

When talking about landscape photography and the “New Topographical” conceptual examination of existence, rather than the figurative value of this work, my tutor comments that “the work and its derivatives have intrinsic aesthetic values. Those you should have examined, identified and discussed”. This is a good point and relates back to point 1 above. My research led me in some interesting directions and I used “New Topographics” to highlight how new concepts and ideas within the boundaries of the landscape photography genre led to its acceptance as photographic art. I bought the book of the original “New Topographics” exhibition and studied the photographs, but was unable to understand why the featured work was held in such high regard; only that it represented an important breakaway from the purely figurative values of previous work and that it was acclaimed by the artistic community. To understand the aesthetic appeal of this work will be to understand the general appeal of photographic art and its underlying conceptual approach. My tutor warned me that this might take me several years: I’m not there yet.

In conclusion, to fully answer the questions raised in the title and introductory pages of my essay I would have had to have written a far longer essay: perhaps one or more chapters in a book! Nevertheless I feel that I have raised most of the key issues and have done so objectively. Whilst admitting to being a wildlife photographer I have not “taken sides” on any of the issues. As a consequence my conclusions are unsurprising and, although I have been able to find little common ground between the world of photographic art and the world of the wildlife photographer, I believe that I have put forward a strong case for wildlife photography being regarded as an important and influential genre, both now and in the future.

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